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He is soooo talented...

Author: Myrrh
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Sounds childish? I used to be mature but love did this to me...shhh i'll recover or become better... sure!

He is soooo talented...

I loved you
Long before i found you
B'coz you are the dear one
My heart had been waiting for...

Will I let you go?


But only for Loves' sake...

(sorry, i am out of my mind but if my stupidity gives pleasure to someone... let it survive)

Submitted on 2009-07-04 05:47:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  "sorry, i am out of my mind but if my stupidity gives pleasure to someone... let it survive"

| Posted on 2009-07-04 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
i liked it.
very little but cute.
| Posted on 2009-07-04 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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