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    dots Submission Name: The Unending Beginingdots

    Author: AbsolutelyLost
    ASL Info:    27/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 54/41/33
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsThe Unending Beginingdots

    "Sometimes you run out of words, then you make an effort in order to come up with something close.
    From rumbling thoughts to peerless joy,
    From immense despair to a perfect bliss,
    From dusk to dawn, is what's the story associated with magnetic eyes and a flawless smile.
    An admirer of the magical smile asks for a portrait of relentless joy to embark on a friendship for angelical times."

    "Pristine words and thoughts divine,
    Grateful for the complimenting line,
    But sorry, You are no friend of mine."

    "Arbit musings were not distant flirtations.
    In replying to these lines of mine,
    have you not taken a step out of the line?
    So lets not cross the line,
    but still we could just walk the line.
    Friendship follows in due course of time !! "


    Chemistry of history,
    seems like anarchy,
    in the hope of not being an irony !

    Submitted on 2009-07-04 06:31:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice. :)

    What a satisfying read. It was clever, romeo and julietish,

    I like the format, from him to her.
    I like the banter back and forth, there is actually much to read in between lines.

    angelical times

    I wonder what you meant by this or had in mind when you wrote it?

    Your style begs consideration.
    I like that.

    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2011-09-23 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Chemistry of history,
    seems like anarchy,
    in the hope of not being an irony !

    AMAZING yet again. At first I wasn't sure where you were going with this and was like huh? But I got it. I love how you compare and contrast a lot of things in this post

    From rumbling thoughts to peerless joy,
    From immense despair to a perfect bliss,
    From dusk to dawn,

    I feel it gives the reader more of an understanding and ability to paint a picture in their mind. Great post here

    | Posted on 2009-07-05 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]

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