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    dots Submission Name: Could of; Would of; Should ofdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
    Total Views: 479
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       I hate my Mother


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    Slowly killing me you are.
    With those lies you live with,
    now have forced me to live with.

    Although you know I speak the truth
    you turn away with shame.

    As if by ignoring the obvious,
    all wrong doings can be taken back.
    Therefore I could lead a normal life.

    Yet you and I both know what reality lies ahead...

    Granted your lies are a stab in the back
    It is not the straw that broke the camels back

    My realization as an adult
    Your daughter
    I meant less to you than the possibility of those material objects you could have received

    Allowing him to have his way with me
    YOU KNEW OF THIS!

    Yet again you turn away with shame
    As if all wrong doings can be taken back

    There are NO take backs
    Could of; Should of; Would of
    Do not make a difference here

    You choose this life for me,
    you gave me all these tears.

    Now I am living with this pain
    Pain...

    Of being abused by a father figure I would have died for
    Pain...

    Of the betrayal I have fallen into caused by my Mother.




    Submitted on 2009-07-04 14:14:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I am so sorry I have read two other poems of yours and I am pretty sure you lived this.

    NO CHILD SHOULD EVER EVER HAVE TO LIVE THIS LIFE!!

    And your mother was just as responsible as he was! More so I think, he was a step father she YOUR mother. It is her job to provide you with a safe loving nurturing world to develop and grow and learn in.
    To provide you with protection and love.
    She should have cut his balls off duct taped them to his mouth and then called the police the second she found out,
    She is and was no mother.
    I am sorry you lived this way, but know it was NOT your fault, and you did NOT deserve that life.

    always
    trynfinity


    If you ever need to vent talk anything to someone who will not judge no matter what is said and won't carry you around like shame ..... Please feel free to send me a message.
    | Posted on 2009-07-04 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]


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