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I know exactly what I want to do. I want to finger paint on you. I want to try out every startling, brilliant hue. Perhaps I will start with a piercing jolt of yellow that would splay your neurons into shock— I could rewire you to be electricity. Then comes the flash of red that would kick your head into a mess— oh just you wait for the frantic frenzy I can project! And then, there is blue— manic splash to match your coursing, pulsing veins— Oh, you. Can I retain the flash flood of color these ardent hands contain? Or do my hands cover and contaminate— painkiller poison paint? This is what I do. Who are you this time, Mister, who? I’ve got to get my hands on you. |
i feel a jackson pollock emotion in this.... painting with splashes...and you take the metaphor all the way through the poem in such "colorful" fashion to describe your passion... and this makes me wonder...how are there no comments on such a piece? i'm so surprised...you really can turn a phrase and your words really show! jacob | Posted on 2011-04-22 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ] | |