i always wanted freedom.
to feel like nothing could hold me back.
i wanted to fly alone.
find somewhere new.
i wanted freedom.
the chance to be free
i wanted to feel it.
away from my nightmares.
away from my thoughts and feelings.
just to be free.
not controlled by my past.
not told off by my future.
just freedom.
Hm... I dunno, this piece needs something else to work. There's not enough feeling, explosion in this words. A poem should be always a hybrid of which you want to express and of the poetic language itself, or current stance, if you will, not just plain talk.
Submission Name: freedom.
