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A Letter To God

Author: Megsrus aka Meg
ASL Info:    15/f/USA
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Words: 227
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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A Letter To God

Dear God there are some issues
Which I'd like to bring to light
It seems that all the human race
Is filled with hate and fight
People are judged by appearance
Religion and were they live
Always finding a reason to war
They've forgotten how to forgive
Dear God if you can hear me
Please listen to my plea
All your forests are being cut down
Oil is spilling in your sea
Animals are being hunted
Until they are no more
People are dumping all their trash
Upon your land and shore
Dear God I don't know what to do
I'm just one girl after all
I can't change the entire world
Not when the odds against me are so tall
But someone must do something
Like this we cannot stay
There must be some method
Some secret, hidden way
Dear God I think I have an idea
If we all work as one
Then we can turn off this terrible path
And return to our innocent fun
Well Lord I really have to go
There is a lot of people who I have to tell
About this plan you've helped to make
Your Daughter, Ariel

Submitted on 2009-07-04 19:28:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  don't listen to Paradox.
God hasn't forsaken us.
he exist and he protects us.
i know praying to God helps. and he always listens.but sometimes we don't get an answer to problems. i choose to think that God has a reason for those times.
btw love your name..
| Posted on 2009-07-05 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

I like the innocence of this piece. Though I cannot relate to the subject matter. I feel that god, if he ever existed, has forsaken us long ago...
| Posted on 2009-07-04 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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