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You Sigh


Author: my shadow
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Words: 10
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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There are only four words in the English language that end in "igh"; this is now I remember them. Why? Why not? How would you do it? Give it a try, post it - I'd like to see the result of your just playing around with the words.


You Sigh



My touch high
on your thigh
comes nigh
you sigh




Submitted on 2009-07-04 23:18:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Lol i think its funny how you took the only words ending with igh
And made a short poem with them....hehe im not that good lmao
| Posted on 2014-03-14 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
  cute.simple. and fun I Like it Tee hee
| Posted on 2011-11-19 00:00:00 | by Marybelle | [ Reply to This ]
  
You touch high
on my thigh.
The ground comes nigh
and YOU sigh.

LOL. Sorry, best I could do. I like your version much better. :-)

| Posted on 2009-12-08 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
  cute.simple.i like it.
rachel:)
| Posted on 2009-07-05 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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