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    dots Submission Name: Tearsdots
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    Author: Monsun
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Berlin Germany
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 17/18/15
    Words: 261
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 784
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1420



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    I miss you
    i cry for you
    I miss you
    Please dont cry

    we will be together soon my love
    soon the sun will set love
    it will set on this voyage i have partook
    and soon i will be back in you arms, and you eyes will be what i see when look

    For my heart is heave with the burden
    the burden of distance, what a burden
    My eyes cry, tears
    my eyes cry tears

    My Heart is heavey and so full of love
    and my heart weeps for your love
    I will never forsake you
    my love, i would die for you

    The sun is setting on my journey
    and soon i will be in your arms at the end of this journey
    I long for you arms
    so you can hold me and kiss my long past wounded scarred arms.

    You are my Rose
    you are my Rose
    forever you shall be
    the one in which I wish to see

    I will bring you up to my level
    and cast away all your devils
    and soon one day
    we can sit and pray

    It was you who dried my tears
    it was me who caught your tears
    and it was me who kissed away your tears
    and you are the reason for my joyous tears

    Soon The sun will set my love
    Soon this will all be over my love
    and it will be you i come for my love
    and i will dry all of you tears




    Submitted on 2009-07-05 14:36:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Scaredheart is a very lucky girl to have you. None of my boyfriends or anything could think up anything sweet like that. It was beautiful, and made me feel warm and fuzzy inside. I absolutely loved it! It was very heart touching. ^-^ I wish you the best of luck with her!
    | Posted on 2009-07-11 00:00:00 | by Rune | [ Reply to This ]
      ..Pssst, no one seems to know our relationship isn't on line....o.o Also, thanks love *Huggles* Made me cry fool, I miss you.
    | Posted on 2009-07-06 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]
      Is it like an online relationship or one thats like hes gone to the military. Honey from my experence online relations ships never work but i wish you all the luck in the world.
    | Posted on 2009-07-05 00:00:00 | by IleriahMarie | [ Reply to This ]


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