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    dots Submission Name: my little uncle sam.dots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 430
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    Bytes: 239



    Description:
       it's about my kitten who turned one year old yesterday.


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    dotsmy little uncle sam.dots
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    my baby boy.
    such a jumping little joy.

    my little kitten.
    with your big eyes im smitten.


    you are all i am.
    my little uncle sam.

    happy birthday sammy.





    Submitted on 2009-07-05 19:16:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Uncle Sam! Is that the kitten's name? If so, it is the cutest and most unique name for a kitten in all of the universe!

    I had a minature Schnauser that I named "Dr. Pepper"!

    Cute poem, with a delightful mood!
    | Posted on 2009-07-05 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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