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Promise Me Again


Author: trynfinity
ASL Info:    38/f/California
Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 149 /145 /91
Words: 137
Class/Type: Poetry /Sorry
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Wishing for another chance with the one you love


Promise Me Again




Promise Me Again


If you say the words,
I'll listen.
I'll believe them,
I will try.

Promise me forever,
I'll be there by your side.
Promise to never leave me,
or stop loving me day to day.
If you say it,
I will listen
give me one more chance I pray.

Please lets just start over,
and I'll believe I stand a chance.
That in your eyes
I'm not the failure,
that it seems you believe I am.

If you say the words I will listen,
I'll believe it's really true.
That I can have forever,
and forever is seen here with you.

If you promise I've learned,
I'll listen.
Please don't tell me
it's become way too late.
I'm still worth promising forever,
not a failed unworthy mistake.




Submitted on 2009-07-05 20:47:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow another great post wow...

Please lets just start over,
and I'll believe I stand a chance.
That in your eyes
I'm not the failure,
that it seems you believe I am.

DAM!!!!

"That in your eyes
I'm not the failure,
that it seems you believe I am."

WOW this is powerful wanting with all your might longing to be able to go back in time and change things. To have just one chance... to make things as you wish its an amazing write i'm sure alot can understand what you say here i know i sure can

Jackz
| Posted on 2009-07-06 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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