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Prince Charming.

Author: trynfinity
ASL Info:    38/f/California
Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 149 /145 /91
Words: 250
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Do not doubt
do not question.
It's the truth behind all the pain.
You have been always my
Prince Charming.

Prince Charming.

For all the love you've given
for the patience you've always shown.
For all your wants unfulfilled
I wanted more for you
you know.

For being my constant hero
my knight come to save the day.
My life was blessed the day you loved me
in every perfect way.

In spite of every failure
every disappointment you've felt because of me.
You're still my one true hero
my savior, my wants
my dreams.

I'm grateful for everything you've given
forgive me for how things have seemed.
I'm stronger I'm alive I'm different
your love is all I need.

You fought for me when I wouldn't
allowing me the view from within your eye.
So please
know I know you tried.

If your presence you're doubting was good
it's because of you that today I am here.
Writing with ink and not blood
you're the reason it's clear.

Your love and your touch
they've been perfect.
Your friendship no other can touch.
forever will you be my hero
who's given always so much.

Together or apart
I love You!
I'm better because you were there.
You're the good in my life
and I'm stronger because you cared.

Do not doubt
do not question.
It's the truth behind all the pain.
You have been always my
Prince Charming.

And you'll be always
till the end of my days.

Submitted on 2009-07-05 20:55:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i like it.
one time i wrote this stupid song about
"once upon a times".
but mine was about the end.
yours in now.
i really like hearing it from a different veiw.
| Posted on 2009-07-07 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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