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The End


Author: trynfinity
ASL Info:    38/f/California
Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 149 /145 /91
Words: 252
Class/Type: Poetry /Broken
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I know that you have tried
to find reason everyday.
Something to hold onto
make it worthy enough to stay.


The End




I love you now and forever
no matter what everyday.
If we stayed together forever
or go now our separate ways.

You've given me my reason
a strength that feeds my heart.
Love I never dreamed of
so much more from the start.

I know it is my failures
the constant letting down.
That have caused for us this gap
this place that we're here at now.

I know that you have tried
to find reason everyday.
Something to hold onto
make it worthy enough to stay.

I'm so sorry I don't give you
what it is you want and need.
Unable to make you happy
stifelled you cannot breath.

I know that other women
are more that just a thought.
They are hope a want a desire
a chance for what I'm not.

My love I am so sorry
For all the ways I've let you down.
It was never what I wanted
and not what I want for you now.

Now I sit here and I'm thinking
I owe you so much more.
The chance to be whole and happy
As I walk forever out the door.

Not because I don't love you
not because I want you hurt.
But because you deserve so much more
than a wife who's only dirt.

Please find a love forever
and know I'll always be near.
Thank you for all you've given
for trying from year to year.




Submitted on 2009-07-05 20:59:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this. At first I didn't think I was going to but its more of letting go than "falling in love" although here is a thought.

When you write at some points it sounds better (to me) instead of using "don't" "i've" "you've" "i'm" (I am) write out the entire word here's where I think it would sound better

I'm so sorry I don't give you
what it is you want and need.
Unable to make you happy
stifelled you cannot breath.

Granted at some points it does sound better to use those words don't/i've/you've but at the same time when your writing read it back to yourself with the opposite of what you wrote see if it sounds better
| Posted on 2009-07-06 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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