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waiting for you.


Author: PopRocksRae
ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232 /369 /355
Words: 106
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Average Vote:    3.5000
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Description:




waiting for you.



i'm always nervous.
you are my one true love.
i pace around the room.
i'm always too much.

i click from page to page.
waiting for you to arrive.
it says you're on.
but i think it's a lie.

i type at random poetry.
my heart falls down.
my ears are wide open.
listening for that sound.

the one where it beeps.
says i have a reply.
my mind plays tricks on me.
i feel like im going to cry.

i sit here alone.
i have no clue what to do.
so i just sit here.
waiting on you.





Submitted on 2009-07-06 15:04:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I hate waiting for a response to an email, Even more so I go nuts waiting for a response to a text message or voicemail. Literally nuts.

Nice job relaying that here,
| Posted on 2009-07-07 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it, I like the anticipation of waiting for
that one person. I feel you.
But your Gramer could use a little work.
| Posted on 2009-07-07 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
  The beat is a bit awkward at points, however I like the overall impression it gives. It does an excellent job conveying emotion. Anyone who has ever waited for a reply will understand where you are coming from.

Keep on writing!

~Kirst
| Posted on 2009-07-06 00:00:00 | by Snarkypoet | [ Reply to This ]


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