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    dots Submission Name: The Locked Heartdots
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    Author: LuluLamperouge
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/2/3
    Words: 237
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       A poem I have on allpoetry.com scam. Its about a girl named Summer Benash...someone I've desired for so long....


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    dotsThe Locked Heartdots
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    I'm losing my head, my heart is beating for one that I cannot have
    I want her so bad....so much I could burst
    Tears pour for her and my tears never give out
    I'm learning how to love again thanks to her...
    But now I can't have her she won't let me

    I show her my heart, my soul, every fiber of me that I can
    Yet she still does not love me
    The tears fall more and more each time
    So now I lock my heart but, she has the key
    I want her and when she will take me....
    I hope she unlocks this broken locked heart

    The shattered pieces are more shattered as I fall for her everyday
    The pain getting worse to control
    Only thing I can do is be by her side and be there for her
    Show her that I can be just friends as well
    Even if it kills me doing so I will do it for her

    Someone tell me is it worth this wait?
    I've waited for so long....
    Its been almost close to a year since I've met her
    I even poured my heart out to her in May of 2009
    She's known I liked her yet she does not tell me any answer...
    No confirmation on if she would be with me or not
    So should I wait.....should I stay so locked up.....




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