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    dots Submission Name: That pit in your stomach :[dots
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    Author: TasteMyRainbow
    ASL Info:    17/Male/In your pants.
    Elite Ratio:    5.07 - 21/22/17
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1087
    Average Vote:    3.8000
    Bytes: 493



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       I actually just found this on my binder from like 3 years ago. i thought it was funny...Haha :]


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    dotsThat pit in your stomach :[dots
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    The pit in your stomach.
    You wanna touch it.
    Tell it to get the fuck out.
    And again, you don't...
    Because It' will just ignore you and stay a pit in your stomach.
    Just like females, who don't listen when you say:
    "I'm gay, Not interested."
    There like that pit in your stomach.
    So what's left to do now? You ask?
    Punch the fuck outta your stomach....
    and do the same to the girl.
    :]




    Submitted on 2009-07-07 03:03:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is awesome! I loved it!
    Especially the ending.
    It made me giggle.
    Though it also sad, but that pit in your stomach wont be there forever.
    It may seem like it, but in the time, your heart is only getting stronger; making you stronger.
    FIGHT THE POWER!
    The pit will go away in time.
    It will be a growing expirence. ^_^
    | Posted on 2009-10-16 00:00:00 | by Vermalin | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem just made me laugh, and brightened my day. I think if you were to focus on something else you could make such a beautiful poem, but it was pretty short and funny. I liked it. :]
    | Posted on 2009-08-20 00:00:00 | by smexybabe0101 | [ Reply to This ]
      haha nice, well I don't think I would ever resort to doing something like that but yeah this made me laugh I got a visual of the girl getting owned
    | Posted on 2009-07-27 00:00:00 | by PrinceofDark | [ Reply to This ]
      My gawd o.O

    Honestly, I wish I was mean enough to do that most of the time...
    Flipped mojo's are a living hell.
    I'm sticking with slugs... screw you all (:
    | Posted on 2009-07-13 00:00:00 | by AvaAdore | [ Reply to This ]
      OMG!
    I remember when you wrote this, you bent over in Science class and showed it to me and was like, "I'm gonna give this to Suzie on Valentines Day" I busted out laughing D I think we were like in Freshman year exactly, in Fells Class....when you were at the admitting stage of your fruityness.

    Anywho, I actually think this is quite funny, But I feel bad for the female, cause she's gonna get the [censored] punched outta her DX. Your a violent one. But, Personally You write quite amusing stuff....but I think you should start to write more serious things. Possibly brighten your horizon.

    Just Saying

    -Your bestie Clareh-
    | Posted on 2009-07-07 00:00:00 | by clarywhite wolf | [ Reply to This ]


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