Description: I actually just found this on my binder from like 3 years ago. i thought it was funny...Haha :]
That pit in your stomach :[ -------------------------------------------
The pit in your stomach.
You wanna touch it.
Tell it to get the fuck out.
And again, you don't...
Because It' will just ignore you and stay a pit in your stomach.
Just like females, who don't listen when you say:
"I'm gay, Not interested."
There like that pit in your stomach.
So what's left to do now? You ask?
Punch the fuck outta your stomach....
and do the same to the girl.
:]
This is awesome! I loved it!
Especially the ending.
It made me giggle.
Though it also sad, but that pit in your stomach wont be there forever.
It may seem like it, but in the time, your heart is only getting stronger; making you stronger.
FIGHT THE POWER!
The pit will go away in time.
It will be a growing expirence. ^_^
This poem just made me laugh, and brightened my day. I think if you were to focus on something else you could make such a beautiful poem, but it was pretty short and funny. I liked it. :]
OMG!
I remember when you wrote this, you bent over in Science class and showed it to me and was like, "I'm gonna give this to Suzie on Valentines Day" I busted out laughing D I think we were like in Freshman year exactly, in Fells Class....when you were at the admitting stage of your fruityness.
Anywho, I actually think this is quite funny, But I feel bad for the female, cause she's gonna get the [censored] punched outta her DX. Your a violent one. But, Personally You write quite amusing stuff....but I think you should start to write more serious things. Possibly brighten your horizon.
Submission Name: That pit in your stomach :[
