This is good, very thought provoking and powerful in a sense that it is short and as soon as youre getting into it then wham! Youre done reading it and then you are forced to comprehend what has just been said. The short stanzas are like little hammers hitting you hard and fast and then the end just reinforces what has been said. I liked it, thought it was special to say the least.
I really enjoyed this piece because it was short and to the point. You didn't waste any time trying to get your message across but you did it so strongly. I loved the slight hint of irony that subtly finds its way into this piece as well. Great job. Hope to read more of your writing in the future:)
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