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    dots Submission Name: Because of Goddots
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    Author: BenCollier
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 425/386/88
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    Description:
       I orginall posted this poem under another name. "Because of Her". Dedicated to my wife. A short time ago we were re-reading our poems and she suggested I retitle it "Because of God" I think the poingancy with the new title hits home more, and she agreed. So here it is again.


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    dotsBecause of Goddots
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    For so long of my breath, I exist
    For so long of my existence, you cause
    For so long from your cause, I love
    For so long of my love, you remain

    With bursting heart of my joy, I grow
    With bursting heart of my growth, you influence
    With bursting heart of your influence, Iím humbled
    With bursting heart of my humbleness, you compel

    Through passion of my soul, I awake
    Through passion of my awakening, you provide
    Through passion of your provisions, I indulge
    Through passion of my indulgence, you moderate

    Of my eyes reopened, I see
    Of my ears unblocked, I hear
    Of my heart unburdened, I blossom
    Of my essence released, I pray




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      It is rare that such beauty and humility exist in a man. I liked the description.
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