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    dots Submission Name: Second Bestdots
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    Author: Lincesa
    ASL Info:    15/f/The kitchen
    Elite Ratio:    5.78 - 11/9/9
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    If you could see through my eyes,
    would you tell me you love me?
    What of my yearning for such a love,
    I see you can give. It tears me to pieces,
    seeing just how your smile sends my heart into discord.

    I love you, and you seem to forget I'm here,
    blinded by someone who feels absolutely nothing for you.

    Don't you see that I can be what you need?
    No, no you don't. You just don't see how much I love you. How much I cry for you,
    how much I die each day for you.

    I'm only second best when it comes to you,
    and now I find myself crying to be that person that holds your heart in their very hands.

    But I'm only second best, aren't I?




    Submitted on 2009-07-08 00:10:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This brings back memories of the pain and confusion of first love. Being in love with an older friend's boyfriend when I was 14 was devastating at the time. Luckily I grew out of it. Very well written.
    | Posted on 2009-07-08 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, I had it stowed away in an old notebook from like fifth grade so it's fine Poe thanks. Thank you for the comment grey_girl.
    | Posted on 2009-07-08 00:00:00 | by Lincesa | [ Reply to This ]
      Lin, that was amazing. It's exactly how I'm feeling at this very moment...I can't believe I'm stuck on him. This poem is basically everything I'm feeling, I can relate to it so much...Bless you for writing this. It was very good.
    | Posted on 2009-07-08 00:00:00 | by ThePuppet | [ Reply to This ]
      They never love anyone who loves them first... they like the chase. If you love him, make sure he notices you, then ignore him totally, or date someone else.

    Isn't "Love" a horrible confusing thing? At 14, you'll die a 1,000 love deaths, write 1,000 love poems, before saying, Ahhhh screw it, let THEM chase ME!

    That's when you're real life will start.
    | Posted on 2009-07-08 00:00:00 | by grey_girl | [ Reply to This ]



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