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    dots Submission Name: Just A Messdots
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    Author: Lincesa
    ASL Info:    15/f/The kitchen
    Elite Ratio:    5.78 - 11/9/9
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 39
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 538



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    dotsJust A Messdots
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    Big white walls,
    windows filled with large cat eyes.
    You're on display for the world to see,
    just how different you can be.

    Can you build a fence against them?
    Talk and chat, and don't turn back.
    It's obvious that you're dying, dying.
    And now you're just a mess, quit that big talking.

    So now go out in style,
    flash that grin and sway those hips,
    flip that hair and ignore those glares.
    Because you're just a mess.




    Submitted on 2009-07-08 16:13:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you poem is very flashy, well written, mystic in a way , i see the adventure in your writing, Chris
    | Posted on 2009-08-12 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]



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