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    dots Submission Name: Magnificent Armourdots
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    Author: stormyskies
    ASL Info:    35 f melb Aust
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 979/832/230
    Words: 225
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 26
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    dotsMagnificent Armourdots
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    Avoidance of pain
    A suit of armour worn.
    For a battle that began
    so long ago.
    The wounds and scars
    still covered and protected
    by this magnificent armour.

    Bullet proof and strong
    This defence had served well,
    providing much needed protection and
    Saving the soldiers life on many occasion.
    Upon her return home the soldier
    left unable to peel off the suit
    no longer needed.
    The wounds lay deep and festered
    her fear that removing it
    would be the death of her.

    For many years the armour
    continued to be worn,
    mended and polished.
    The soldier proud of its usefulness
    although no longer needed.
    Until the day she met her warrior princess,
    causing the soldier to want
    to show her true self and to slowly
    take away the heavy protection.

    Left with nothing but raw skin and pain.
    The frightened soldier desperately tried to
    put the suit back on, but to no avail.
    The warrior princess had already begun
    to soothe the wounds with a special balm
    and the soldier with his calming presence.
    Tending and caring for the soldier to
    reveal the vulnerable person beneath.
    She is the only one and without her
    the soldier may have been a magnificent suit
    of armour for the rest of her years....

    (And they lived happily ever after the end LOL)





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