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    dots Submission Name: One who sees my souldots
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    Author: stormyskies
    ASL Info:    35 f melb Aust
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 979/832/230
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 40
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 994



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    dotsOne who sees my souldots
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    Hearts intertwined
    souls connected
    we fell in love
    yet feared rejection.

    Reaching my soul
    candlels lit
    i wanted to deny
    but had to permit.

    More than attraction
    or sexual lust
    the love we felt
    not a breeze, but a gust.

    Insecurity and fear
    pulled us apart
    leaving us both
    to carry a broken heart.

    Burying feelings
    deep in my soul
    never forgetting
    the memories of old.

    Feelings we felt
    characteristics of you
    found for a moment
    in others, were not true.

    Searching for you
    in everyone i met
    but our time apart
    i no longer regret.

    Providing a chance
    richer than none
    to this point first,
    we needed to come.


    Together now,
    never again to stall
    i give my heart
    to one who sees my soul.




    Submitted on 2009-07-10 02:19:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What a precious poem this is !!!

    Everything about it is pure emotion and a real delight to read.

    Surely one of your best to date.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-07-14 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



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