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    dots Submission Name: Souls Reliefdots
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    Author: stormyskies
    ASL Info:    35 f melb Aust
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 979/832/230
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 31
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    dotsSouls Reliefdots
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    Such as the intense heat that glows within the earth,
    growing uncontrollably.
    So is the passion and nostaligia that burns throughout my being.
    Every fibre responding as it recognises you.
    Just as nature and natural forces,
    our bodies and souls withstanding, forever connected.
    Distance and time unable to divide that which, 'the powers that be', have united.
    Warm breath against my skin, your shape, each and every hair.
    Beget sighs of relief from my weary heart and soul.




    Submitted on 2009-07-10 02:23:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked it. For once here is a poem that is not depressing and i like it. Very powerful. I'm guessing that you are in love?
    | Posted on 2009-09-01 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow.........very intense and very powerfull. Great description from you once again.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-07-14 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



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