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    dots Submission Name: From The Heart (Forever Fiction)dots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 616
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 806



    Description:
       the pen chase freedom from the tricks then pause....
    and i trade my heart for the page.

    so here you guys go, i lay my soul bare again


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    dotsFrom The Heart (Forever Fiction)dots
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    from somewhere inside me
    i feel and i love...
    but....

    without knowing why or how-
    with pride aside I dive in doubt
    as i cry in loud,
    then find my cloud.
    spy in shrouds of mystery
    eye the broad
    up and down, yes
    but i more mind her thoughts
    as if to bind the soul
    in leaflets, sheets equiped
    she's fit
    but not the least a ditz
    she is queen and wears
    her peace as garb
    a reef of shards,
    her crown is my relief in heart
    and we are
    just a reach apart
    a thin layer of life
    just to keep afar
    so I'm solemn for this reason
    as treasoned heart
    cause i could never break her heart
    not the least apart..............




    Submitted on 2009-07-10 11:25:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is very good, and very sincere. Youíre pretty good at expressing yourself on what your feelings are. Itís not exactly rare but itís hard to put feelings into words and I feel you did an excellent job. If the piece was written for anyone in particular theyíre very lucky. Keeps it going and I would hope to see more.


    Faid
    | Posted on 2009-11-18 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]


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