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    dots Submission Name: Sexual Tipsdots
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    Author: Robert Neville
    ASL Info:    16/m/London
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 10/192/232
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsSexual Tipsdots
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    Sexual Tips


    Your advancements are tugging on my heart strings
    And to you, to you, they donít mean a single thing
    Its just Saturday night, common practice for you
    Its just your natural human thing to do
    Itís not for me, but I thank you
    I came here to stand on my own and leave on my own
    And still you advance, I donít want your dance
    Your dated moves and your sexual tips
    Iím still confused as to why when you kiss you have four lips


    The advancements have turned to disillusion
    I always knew you suffered from delusions
    Itís Sunday morning, your not at home, common practice
    I can tell you what your life is lacking
    You donít want me, I donít blame you
    You say you were only passing through
    And still you advance, I donít want your dance
    Your dated moves and your sexual tips
    Iím still confused as to why when you kiss you have two sets of lips




    Submitted on 2009-07-10 16:55:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Perv.... What... Confused.... four sets of lips....!?!?!?! explain!!!!! oh and... <3 sex
    | Posted on 2009-07-21 00:00:00 | by IleriahMarie | [ Reply to This ]


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