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your love takes me away


Author: Evie
ASL Info:    19/f/oh
Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 80 /84 /30
Words: 87
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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your love takes me away


sitting there staring off into the distance
this hillside i always find myself but i don't know why
i make the clouds into all sorts of things in my mind
but really your whats on my mind
the wind blows and it brushes my cheek
about the same way when you sweep me of my feet
i try to tell you all the time but why try to explain
your already mine, mine to hold mine to have
no matter what the good and the bad




Submitted on 2009-07-11 19:28:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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