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    dots Submission Name: For her love, so she will know I do too.dots
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    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 15/18/50
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 50
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 804



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    dotsFor her love, so she will know I do too.dots
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    someone help me

    please, tell me

    how do i show it

    show that i love her

    more than i can explain

    write rhyme or display!

    ive never felt it so sincere before

    why no matter how hard i try

    i cant tell her how much i love her

    so she will know I sincerely mean it.

    her love makes me cry

    i wanna be her nice guy

    forever and ever but why

    is it so hard for me to do

    im not afraid of her

    she makes me feel special

    like i never have before

    liz, won't you now know

    that i do truly

    with all of my heart..

    LOVE YOU!




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