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For her love, so she will know I do too.
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Author:
vLame
ASL Info:
21/m/lbc
Elite Ratio:
1.61 - 15/18/50
Words:
131
Class/Type:
Prose/Love
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Description:
http://tinyurl.com/LIZnJon
A gallery on my myspace, 1 line per pic. :D
For her love, so she will know I do too.
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someone help me
please, tell me
how do i show it
show that i love her
more than i can explain
write rhyme or display!
ive never felt it so sincere before
why no matter how hard i try
i cant tell her how much i love her
so she will know I sincerely mean it.
her love makes me cry
i wanna be her nice guy
forever and ever but why
is it so hard for me to do
im not afraid of her
she makes me feel special
like i never have before
liz, won't you now know
that i do truly
with all of my heart..
LOVE YOU!
Submitted on 2009-07-12 07:47:21
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