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    dots Submission Name: lossesdots
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    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       its not bout anyone i just got it from a dream i had.


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    dotslossesdots
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    the pain of the loss,
    unbearable.
    crying,
    day and night.
    wishing there was a way,
    to bring you back.
    kowing,
    nothing can do it.
    wanting,
    to see your eyes again.
    asking,
    myself the same question over and over.
    is it my fault?
    telling,
    you i know it isnt.
    i love you!




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