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    dots Submission Name: foreverdots
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    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 417
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       haha i dont have a boyfriend so i dont know y i wrote it! lol


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    dotsforeverdots
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    ever since you left,
    everything i touched,
    reminded me of...
    the sorrow in our last hug,
    the desperation in our last kiss,
    but also,
    the love in your eyes,
    and promise in your voice.
    forever.




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