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    dots Submission Name: The Invisible Handdots
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    Author: harrieart
    ASL Info:    21 / Male / Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 11/5/13
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 69
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 566



    Description:
       Another song by my band FEAR NOT THE GRAVE.
    I have some obvious issues about this fallen and corrupted world.


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    dotsThe Invisible Handdots
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    I'm looking for the secret garden
    But the path gor far and wide
    I've seen nothing but a pattern
    In the way we all reside
    Stuck like I'm facing the shadows
    The light is out of sight
    The truth of a thousand liars
    Are like a blindfold in a fight
    The information open
    To the entirety of man
    Has been everything but open
    Destined to hit the fan

    I'm a physical manifestation
    From my God above
    A fragment of consciousness
    A fragment of love




    Submitted on 2009-07-12 17:53:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      mmm short and to the point normally i am not one to like a post such as this but i like the title and the fact you used God within your write. Nicely done!

    Jackz
    | Posted on 2009-08-15 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]



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