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    dots Submission Name: guardian angeldots
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    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsguardian angeldots
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    who am i you ask?
    i protect you from harm.
    why?
    that is my job.
    how do you protect me if i cant see you?
    i walk silently by your side, shielding you from those of evil.
    i dont understand.
    its simple, you get in trouble, i get you out.
    if you fall, ill catch you.
    if you get lost, i find the way for you.
    do you understand now?
    no.
    i am your guardian angel.




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