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    dots Submission Name: your faultdots
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    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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       ya my x-boyfriend broke my heart bout a week ago. so this poem is his fault.


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    dotsyour faultdots
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    all the tears,
    are your fault.
    all the pain,
    is your fault.
    all the anger,
    is your fault.
    the longing for someone to have again,
    is your fault.
    im hurt,
    and its your fault.
    my heart is broken,
    and it is still your fault.
    your confusion,
    is your fault.
    part of my life wasted,
    and its all your fault.




    Submitted on 2009-07-12 20:17:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know how you feel in this one. We all need someone or something to blame for our sorrow, but in the end we are the ones at fault. For letting ourselves get into this state of mind. You've got potential, keep at it!

    -ToM- aka Hollowpain aka Dizz
    | Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by hollowpain | [ Reply to This ]


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