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    dots Submission Name: lasting impressionsdots
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    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
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    dotslasting impressionsdots
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    when we first met, my impression on you was you are wierd. i thought that impression would last. but it didnt. then i fell in love with you, and my impression was you are the one and only and mine forever. i thought that impression would also last. but oh wasnt i wrong! you broke my heart and my impression on you was you are an asswipe! let me repeat that one more time, YOU ARE AN ASSWIPE!!! now that is a lasting impression.




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