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    dots Submission Name: Hate I Relaseddots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Depressed
    Total Views: 944
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsHate I Relaseddots
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    I take all these drops of hate put them in a bottle

    Drop.
    Drop..
    Drop...

    Hate does not evaporate like other liquids
    Its like oil

    Then one day the bottle is FULL
    This day has come!

    Taking all those hellish years you put me through
    Taking all those lonely nights
    Maybe even a few hopefully moments ( only to be a crushing let down)

    I took all those feelings felt
    All those drops of hatred build up
    All my rage fuming inside
    I finally RELEASED IT

    My drops of hatred could only fester for so long (what did you expect?)
    My hopelessness could only become so strong until it overcame me...
    Until I burst... Literally

    Taking that 12 gauge shot gun to my stomach was my way of releasing

    Do not misunderstand my motivations.
    I did not want to die
    But I also did not want to live with these feelings of uncontrollable hatred and rage.
    So I took a risk and accepted the possibility of dying.

    Once again,
    I am expressing to you all ill feelings are gone, all hatred has been dismissed.

    For I almost took my own life for this result,
    Can't you see?
    My life could not truly begin with all those drops of hatred and rage built up.




    Submitted on 2009-07-13 00:21:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      All I can say it I am grateful that your life you did not take, I wouldn't have been lucky enough or blessed enough to read your thoughts and feel like I know you when we have never met. Like I understand maybe not the little details or the names and particulars. But I understand the emotion and the pain the fear and the hope the hoplessness and the wishing that you convey so well in your posts,

    Thank you for not taking your life , for what ever reason I am lucky you survived

    Always
    Heather
    | Posted on 2009-07-13 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]
      All I can say it I am grateful that your life you did not take, I wouldn't have been lucky enough or blessed enough to read your thoughts and feel like I know you when we have never met. Like I understand maybe not the little details or the names and particulars. But I understand the emotion and the pain the fear and the hope the hoplessness and the wishing that you convey so well in your posts,

    Thank you for not taking your life , for what ever reason I am lucky you survived

    Always
    Heather
    | Posted on 2009-07-13 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]


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