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    dots Submission Name: The Abraded Eddies Swirlingdots
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    Author: SirSerenade
    Elite Ratio:    1.36 - 2/5/15
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Abraded Eddies Swirlingdots
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    The fishermen, the freshmen,
    Dangled their feet
    In the flowing bank of
    Common water.
    A bit of glitter said that even
    Nazarene had that insipid
    Component; the messiah was
    A hum-and-pulse
    Polyglot.
    The sawdust abraded the eddies
    In unflagging diaspora,
    A few Jesus seeds.




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