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    dots Submission Name: Waitingdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/623/381
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Fanfic/I am dead inside
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       I believe my ex cheated on me... and I am getting tested... and waiting is the hardest part there is


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    dotsWaitingdots
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    I have this shadow lurking over head,
    This fear overwhelms my state of mind.

    The what if's and could be's have exhausted my body.
    Living in the unknown
    Out of the loop

    Eats away at me,
    As pray would eat away at their predators

    Slowly I am degrading,
    I am being nothing,
    Absent to all that is going on around me

    Yet aware of every movement
    Waiting for that fateful day to come,
    Simply wanting answers




    Submitted on 2009-07-13 12:11:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That's a tough wait. Good luck to you.
    | Posted on 2009-07-20 00:00:00 | by FallenGrace | [ Reply to This ]
      Answers are the hardest thing to wait for... You feel as if they never come and your hanging on every breath in a limbo all it's own.

    Well said hang in there.

    Heather
    | Posted on 2009-07-15 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]


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