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    dots Submission Name: Ma Dearest Lovedots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    52 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1727/1248/246
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMa Dearest Lovedots
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    Ma dearest love, ma wan true love
    How a miss thee still a caw
    Fur miny a weary mile an year
    Frae me, yiv been awa
    The distance thit’s between us baith
    Seems like a gulf sae wide
    Yet still a feel ye near tae me
    Wherever a may bide

    Ma dearest love, ma wan true love
    A still see ye everyday
    Maist every time a shut ma eeyn
    Or bow ma heid tae pray
    A hear yer voice upon the wind
    Be it gale or gentle breeze
    Singing sweet oor song o love
    Tae sooth ma mind an please

    Ma dearest love, ma wan true love
    A hope thit ye ur weel
    Entwined in awe sic happiness
    Thit ye never will conceal
    A’ll rest weel in the knowledge
    Thit we love each ither still
    We luved back, ma wan true love
    An nae doubt we always will







    Submitted on 2009-07-13 12:41:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Another one to add to your list of great pieces! Do you ever try to publish? You should!

    Keep on writing!
    | Posted on 2009-10-10 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]
      Another romantic classic from you, Frank!
    Your poems in the Scottish dialect have an added charm of the old world, and the sounds of your words ring truer than even your English prose...which is saying something since your English prose is spellbinding!
    You are the premier love poet on Elite! Perhaps, in the western world!
    (revel in your fame!)
    Thanks, as always, for sharing your words here.

    ~Laura
    | Posted on 2009-07-22 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful and very clever...i love your work Frank and this one doesnt miss a beat...I love the nostalgia and warmth that flows from your work..a true Romeo :)
    | Posted on 2009-07-16 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]


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