Description: i almost forgot about this site :P when i logged on i felt like simpley writing something at the moment, so i did.
Our Once Happily Ever After -------------------------------------------
I'm sitting here looking at our old wedding picture in a frame
Thinking to myself how mean and distant we have both became
We used to be so happy but that was back at 'Once Upon A Time'
Now we can barely stand to look each other in the eye
I don't know exactly where we lost it along this hard beaten track
But I desperately hope that somewhere we can get it back
Our vows clearly spoken were "for better or for worse"
But we are standing on the brink of fixing this or a divorce
I don’t know how to help us but I wish there is a way
To bring us back together to our once blissful, happy days
Put aside our old dismays and replace it with forgiveness and some laughter
So we can finally get back to our once 'Happily Ever After'
The simplicity in this is marvelous, and the words tend to paint a pretty distinct picture. The longing is also very vibrant in the words as the poem progress' and distributes the happiness and love that the writer wishes to hold once again, the line:
"Our vows clearly spoken,"for better or for worse"
is what truly caught my attention. I enjoyed the fact that this poem has a sense of nostalgia and longing in it. Cleverly put together, all in all a job well done.
Submission Name: Our Once Happily Ever After
