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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Vanity of Proof


    It is not your own ego
    But always someone else’s pride
    You have to swallow




    Submitted on 2009-07-14 12:08:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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