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    dots Submission Name: Rationalisation of Explanationdots
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    Author: col13x
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    Rationalisation of Explanation


    Do not question
    The almighty plan
    For such are the reprisals of fear
    That turn blind despair into adulation

    The evident proof
    Existent in raped women and children
    Irrefutable in famished stomachs
    Undisguised in all the suffering

    Hangs stark and uncompromising
    Humanity through centuries of historical brutality
    Has treated us with its incontinent blood
    And defiled every precept of love

    “Nothing” has come to save us.

    But still we cling
    Desperate in our own life times
    For some semblance of a reason
    Prepared to receive the miracle
    Which never comes

    One day they say
    Is one thousand years in the mind of God
    And so
    All these prayers will never be answered
    Not until the human voice
    For a millennia has repeated a single word

    It is an existence of shame in heaven
    That such cruelty
    Does not comprehend
    This state of being called “Human”
    Of one life times capacity to be
    So free and so very happy

    We pass unrealised in all our potential
    Having lived our lives in suffering
    Nailed up and stripped to idiot faith
    In some bland concept of Gods fathers day
    Turns every apparent truth
    Into the conceivable lies of fools




    Explain if you would
    The torment
    Rationalise by some beliefs excuse of a plan
    How God allows this to happen

    Faith is a mockery
    Which does not accept responsibility
    and allows us to close our eyes
    And continue to live in luxury

    And while mankind persists in its idolatry of God
    And passes the buck
    To some unknown biblical saviour
    Some Messiah who will receive all our sin
    Half the world continues starving

    Raping, warring, murdering, thirsting
    Dieing of curable diseases
    Judged by their colour
    Living in hovels on rubbish tips

    Pogroms of sectarian violence
    Racial cleansing
    Oil pipelines
    And nationalistic patriotic flag waving

    God

    It is an existence of shame in heaven
    That such cruelty
    Does not comprehend
    This state of being called Human
    Of one life times capacity to be
    So free and so very happily
    Exultant















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