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    dots Submission Name: HIStorydots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 559
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 793



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    dotsHIStorydots
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    he tries, she yells
    she wants, he fails
    whats a man to do
    when she loses her cool?
    he loves her to death
    but she'll never see that
    he throws his life to her command
    but she throws a blind eye along with a hand
    his life thrown into the darkness
    her soul thrown in the abyss

    unable to move on
    he writes her a song
    saying she's all he's lived for
    putting on video his feelings and gore
    he picks up the gun
    still singing "this ends my fun"

    she sees his video
    and begins to feel low
    she watches and cries
    she yells "it's my fault he died"
    and deep in hell he sighs
    his unheard good-byes




    Submitted on 2009-07-14 14:28:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This brought tears to my eyes...
    | Posted on 2011-01-20 00:00:00 | by ShadowsnLights | [ Reply to This ]
      amazing.
    i thought it was great!!
    and i always thought how cool history turned into "his story" i loved it.
    so great writing!
    and loved the end. a little dismal.
    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-07-14 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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