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    dots Submission Name: copper fingersdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    30/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 188/293/258
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 88
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1153



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    dotscopper fingersdots
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    i've followed a dead bird
    through the crevice
    of an eyelash,
    swallowed dry leaves,
    stale air
    & wet ash
    & found that every ship
    circles the islands of summer.
    the warmth of water
    leaks from my open head.

    every kiss,
    each breath,
    lush with the browning snakes
    that my mouth loose,
    are lost in the mush,
    the teaming pond
    of organic thoughts
    that you gave me.

    if you were to look upon me
    while i was dreaming
    & see the lines
    of my face
    all lost in green always,
    would my skin collapse
    leaving only steam behind,
    or copper fingers
    alchemical with lonesome
    newness?

    i want the ether
    to pour lovely through my pores
    like milky wormwood
    across my honeyed tongue.
    my flesh becoming
    like aloe
    & silverish beneath the moon,
    arms attached to arms,
    trees attached to trees
    until the winter comes...

    i need coldness
    to remind me of the heat.




    Submitted on 2009-07-14 20:19:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you lost me a little but then your ending got me back on track.
    so i know i always say the same thing like
    "oh,it was good.." and "oh, it was great"
    but really it was incredible and very well-written.
    i enjoyed the end just because it was so
    good. and i really liked it.
    thats all i guess.
    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-07-15 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]



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