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    dots Submission Name: Footprintdots
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    Author: Lilyan
    ASL Info:    1 Elite Years
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 42/38/26
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 380



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    Wandering alone,
    walking,
    looking down
    at the ground.
    Renitent,
    tough
    muddy ground.
    I noticed
    a footprint.
    Fresh,
    hazel brown
    trace of you.
    And..
    I made another,
    mine
    next to yours.
    I know that
    it is..
    was
    yours..
    with mine.





    Submitted on 2009-07-15 07:05:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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