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What's out of reach

Author: giver_of_death
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Words: 30
Class/Type: Poetry /Romance
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Just, random in english class.

What's out of reach

Know your limits
But don’t play within it
Just have fun
Life’s almost done
Don’t think too much
Just crave that touch
Live in bliss
Get that secret kiss

Submitted on 2009-07-15 10:20:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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