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    Author: maggot4life6969
    ASL Info:    19/Female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.9 - 11/13/19
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    I've been used and abused, 
    I've been cried to and lied to,
    I've felt agony and shame,
    but through it all
    I know I"m not to blame.




    Submitted on 2009-07-15 21:45:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes! This is just how many people, including me, feel. Maybe not all the time but enough. Well done.
    | Posted on 2009-07-16 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]


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