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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Riddle/Love
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    That which can be seen and felt,
    That which can be shared,
    That which can be given to another,
    That which can be found everywhere.
    It can be between us two,
    It can be found between others,
    It can be noticed in all places,
    But it can only be found between two.
    What is it?




    Submitted on 2009-07-15 22:35:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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