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    dots Submission Name: Find it.dots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 493
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsFind it.dots
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    What are you looking for?
    Is it something to make your life better?
    Is it something to get you feeling good?
    Is it something to change the world?
    Is it something to relate to you?
    Is it something to find on your own?
    Is it something to strive for?
    Is it something to share with others?
    Is it something to make life brighter?
    Is it something to uplift those near?
    Is it something to see you through?
    Whatever it is, whatever it may be,
    Look inside yourself and find it to see.
    That where ever you go and whatever you do,
    That all good things lie in us, me and you.




    Submitted on 2009-07-15 22:54:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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