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    dots Submission Name: Reaching with Drunken Handsdots
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    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    26/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 34/223/160
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 637
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    Description:
       It's really a long story, but if you actually know me, you'll get it.
    Basically it's about how when we think all hope is lost, and we've lost ourselves so much that we can't recognize our own reflection, and life is but a shell of what it once was... when we surrender to that kind of being lost- we can gain real clarity, realize some great things, find ourselves again and regain hope.
    Don't know if that's how it happens for everyone, but that's how it happened for me~


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    dotsReaching with Drunken Handsdots
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    Fall-
    Way up high!
    Backwards,
    Like a carousel with an
    Operator who's dropped acid
    All night long.

    Rise-
    Way down low!
    Open,
    Like the first time
    A baby sees, and understands.

    I held your hand.
    You didn't see.
    You kissed my forehead
    While I was asleep.

    And then I fell
    To the bottom of everything.
    Then rose again
    To finally see.




    Submitted on 2009-07-16 07:32:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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