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Reaching with Drunken Hands

Author: doppelganger
ASL Info:    26/f/your brain
Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 34 /223 /160
Words: 82
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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It's really a long story, but if you actually know me, you'll get it.
Basically it's about how when we think all hope is lost, and we've lost ourselves so much that we can't recognize our own reflection, and life is but a shell of what it once was... when we surrender to that kind of being lost- we can gain real clarity, realize some great things, find ourselves again and regain hope.
Don't know if that's how it happens for everyone, but that's how it happened for me~

Reaching with Drunken Hands

Way up high!
Like a carousel with an
Operator who's dropped acid
All night long.

Way down low!
Like the first time
A baby sees, and understands.

I held your hand.
You didn't see.
You kissed my forehead
While I was asleep.

And then I fell
To the bottom of everything.
Then rose again
To finally see.

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