Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Abandon Hope All Yee Who Enter Heredots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 279
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 433
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1931



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsAbandon Hope All Yee Who Enter Heredots
    -------------------------------------------


    Abandon Hope All Yee who Enter Here

    Ever the edifice
    The bold and self-serving statue
    Proud ego stamped
    In the courtyards and squares
    Of those who have diminished ( ordinary )

    Ever the hero who by guile
    Steals the heroes burial
    With self sacrificial offerings of ballot boxes ( rigged )

    Ever the flag waving
    For the faceless dictators
    Who by money and army medals adorned
    Assume control
    Via coup d'état ( or money )

    Ever the religious fanatic
    Behind Iattola, priest, missionary and Papist
    Ever the quiet and raucous rapist
    Of faith

    Ever the secret of power hunger ( sanctioned )
    Allowed to dictate
    Through political expediencies
    Ever the murder of country men
    To rule the country

    Ever the nationalistic barrage of pride
    For coloured cloth
    Defines identity
    And not humanity ( human )

    Ever the innocent left to bleed
    To fill the coffers of nameless greed
    And ever the hate to feed
    The racial, political and religious idiocy ( bigotry )

    Ever the door which opens
    For men and women returning home
    With the triumphal marches
    Of black body bags

    Ever the tear gas, riot shield and rubber bullet
    Ever the faces of Tiananman Square
    Ever the bodies of the World Trade Centre
    Ever the terrorism of lies
    Ever the truth denied

    Ever the innocent left to bleed
    To fill the coffers of nameless greed
    And ever the hate to feed
    The racial, political and religious bigotry ( idiocy )



    Ever the door which open
    Welcoming home
    Mothers and Fathers
    From their long days labours ( ordinary )






    Submitted on 2009-07-16 10:06:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    176552

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    The Abyss of Love written by poetotoe
    untitled written by Outlaw
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    The World written by jjd
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry