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    dots Submission Name: Abandon Hope All Yee Who Enter Heredots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 279
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsAbandon Hope All Yee Who Enter Heredots

    Abandon Hope All Yee who Enter Here

    Ever the edifice
    The bold and self-serving statue
    Proud ego stamped
    In the courtyards and squares
    Of those who have diminished ( ordinary )

    Ever the hero who by guile
    Steals the heroes burial
    With self sacrificial offerings of ballot boxes ( rigged )

    Ever the flag waving
    For the faceless dictators
    Who by money and army medals adorned
    Assume control
    Via coup d'état ( or money )

    Ever the religious fanatic
    Behind Iattola, priest, missionary and Papist
    Ever the quiet and raucous rapist
    Of faith

    Ever the secret of power hunger ( sanctioned )
    Allowed to dictate
    Through political expediencies
    Ever the murder of country men
    To rule the country

    Ever the nationalistic barrage of pride
    For coloured cloth
    Defines identity
    And not humanity ( human )

    Ever the innocent left to bleed
    To fill the coffers of nameless greed
    And ever the hate to feed
    The racial, political and religious idiocy ( bigotry )

    Ever the door which opens
    For men and women returning home
    With the triumphal marches
    Of black body bags

    Ever the tear gas, riot shield and rubber bullet
    Ever the faces of Tiananman Square
    Ever the bodies of the World Trade Centre
    Ever the terrorism of lies
    Ever the truth denied

    Ever the innocent left to bleed
    To fill the coffers of nameless greed
    And ever the hate to feed
    The racial, political and religious bigotry ( idiocy )

    Ever the door which open
    Welcoming home
    Mothers and Fathers
    From their long days labours ( ordinary )

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