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    dots Submission Name: Live to Diedots
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    Author: geekyslacker
    ASL Info:    28/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 64/41/14
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
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       to the one who is letting go, may u succeed in ur endeavor.


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    dotsLive to Diedots
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    Time, my friend.
    Time is all we have.
    Time is all we ask for.
    Time is all we need.
    Time is all that's left.
    Time cannot be returned.
    Time cannot be renewed.
    Time cannot be bought.
    Time is always lost.
    Moments so precious go away in an instant.
    Moments so shameful cannot be erased.
    Time can never be returned.
    Time is a non refundable loan.
    Spend wisely O world traveler.






    Submitted on 2009-07-16 11:00:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A lot of truth to this... great observations.
    | Posted on 2009-09-25 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      This is beautiful...
    | Posted on 2009-07-17 00:00:00 | by coloredstone | [ Reply to This ]
      nice real words lil bear.
    | Posted on 2009-07-16 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      I thank you much indeed .
    Time. Time flies while we sleep. Our lives are short and time is something thats not in our hands.
    Pray that my journey goes well and i will pray for you.
    Pray that i never turn back.
    Pray that i use my time wisely.


    "You have built a sturdy structure and have long hopes yet your death is very near" [ Abdullah ibn Masud radi allah hu anhu]

    “Time is free, but it's priceless. You can't
    own it, but you can use it. You can't keep
    it, but you can spend it. Once you've lost it
    you can never get it back.” Harvey MacKay

    Your good friend
    Fana Salik
    | Posted on 2009-07-16 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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