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Author: Myrrh
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i posted it five minutes back and it entered into some serra's page... i don't know what to do... but it is only venting so i don't care


oh now i understand

right right we shall keep on playing hide and seek through out our lives... then we shall be old... then we'll die...

ofcourse we won't regret inaction..haha we won 't

hide hide hide... illusions within illusions while reality awaits us in dismay

anyway i am no longer me and you are no longer you

like ummm take a circle... each point on its circumference is equidistant from the centre... and the points that are either inside or outside represent some other invisible circles ... there are certain things that when you try to change... they change completely or significantly

like our love... it has reached a different level... upper, lower or non existent... i can't decide but it is not that heavenly feeling that it used to be... yes, sadly so...i think it is same on your side too...

Submitted on 2009-07-16 11:16:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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